Remembering Olsen
 
Screenplay
 
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                                                 FADE IN
 
INT. CATERING HALL - EVENING
 

Dim lights, soft music, camera flashes, a rumble of reacquainted voices fill the small, well-decorated room.

 

A faceless man in a blue suit walks past a banner    across the back wall, WELCOME CLASS OF 1996.

 

He stops for a moment in front of the juke box. The lights on it flash. Standing beside it is a man in a    grey suit. His face visible, only for a moment.

 

The man in the blue suit’s finger moves forward and points to the jukebox.

 

He continues walking, shaking hands with other well dressed men. A woman stops him with her hand on his chest. She stretches her legs in high heel shoes so her lips can reach his ear, she whispers. She laughs      and the man continues to walk.

 

He stops at the bar where a young man and a young    woman greet him. The bartender hands the young man a   drink. He sips it, the bartender hands him another.

    

He passes the second drink to a waitress who places it    on a tray with a collection of others.

 

The new drink sits on a napkin and makes a trip around    the room passing happy faces. Some guests move around    as if reenacting memories from their past. Others look      on and laugh.

 

A group of men stand together holding their drinks at     their sides while belting out lyrics to old favorite   tunes.

 

The glasses sit still on the tray when the waitress stops momentarily. A blurred MAN and WOMAN carry on a     conversation over the music at a table as the waitress puts their drinks down.

 

 

 

              WOMAN

     That’s something a family

     can never get over.

 

              MAN

     Especially his dad.

 

The woman acknowledges the waitress.

 

              WOMAN

     Thank you.

 

              MAN

     Yes, thank you very much.

 

The waitress smiles and collects some empty glasses.

 

The woman bobs her head back and forth to continue   their conversation. The man follows her head back and      forth.

 

              WOMAN

     Do you think his dad had

     any indication?

 

The woman picks up her glass. The man shakes his head.

 

The rest of the glasses on the tray begin to move    again as the waitress makes her way to the next    table.

 

Once again, she places drinks down on a table. This one seats THREE MEN in mid conversation.

 

              MAN 1

     She didn’t want you then.

     You think something

     changed in the last ten

     years?

 

They all laugh.

 

              MAN 2

     Hey, a lot about me has

     changed in the last ten

     years.

 

              MAN 1

     Yea, less hair, less

     money, and less reason to

     look at you now.  

 

They all laugh again, including the waitress.

 

              MAN 2

     There’s more.

 

              MAN 1

     Yep, more stomach, more

     naps.

 

Man 2 cuts him off.

    

              MAN 2

     We get the idea.

 

There is more laughter. The waitress begins to step  away with a big smile.

 

              MAN 3

     Thanks sweetheart. We’ll

     take another round on

     your way back.

 

He slides a twenty dollar bill on her tray as she    smiles and begins to make her way around the room.

 

As a wet ring forms on the bill under a glass, MAN 1 is heard from behind.

 

              MAN 1

     Keep em’ coming doll.

 

The waitress clears off some empty glasses at another     table seating TWO WOMEN. A THIRD stands speaking with      a MAN behind the two women.

 

The man excuses himself from the conversation and    motions toward the waitress.

 

              MAN

     Thanks. We’ll take

     another round on your way

     back.    

The waitress nods and scribbles on her pad.

 

One of the sitting women acknowledges the waitress   with a smile and a nod. She continues speaking.

 

              WOMAN 1

     It was two weeks ago.

     Only a few blocks from

     here.

 

FLASHBACK

 

EXT. INTERSECTION – NIGHT

 

A small automobile moves along quickly towards a green    traffic light.

 

A large truck follows closely behind.

 

              WOMAN 1’S VOICE (CONT.)

     The guy I work with said    

     she died instantly.

 

The automobile continues to move along.

 

              WOMAN 2’S VOICE

     I never trusted those

     little foreign cars.

 

The traffic light changes to red. The automobile skids    to a halt.

 

              MAN’S VOICE

     Especially when a large

     truck barrels into one.

 

The truck continues into the automobile.

 

BACK TO SCENE

 

The waitress walks away after putting her pad back in     her pocket.  

 

Idle chit-chat around the room as the tray’s trip    comes to an end at a low table in front of two    small couches towards the corner of the room.

 

The waitress puts the glass in front of JESSICA KASTA,    28, blond, typical high end department store clerk,   dressed to the nines. Sitting across is PATTY MADIEL,      28, not as flashy.

 

Jessica doesn’t acknowledge the waitress. She picks up    her fresh drink and sips through the stirrer.

 

Patty gives the waitress a friendly nod and smile    before she walks off.

 

Jessica’s eyes motion across the room toward a blonde     man in a tight dress shirt.

 

                  JESSICA

     I can’t believe how good

     Donny looks.

 

The man catches Jessica’s eye and then looks away    abruptly.

    

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Maybe I should have taken him

     up on his repeated offers back

     in high school.

    

She slides her tongue across her teeth.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Right now he’s wishing I

     did.

 

              PATTY

     Oh, you think they all

     wish that.

 

Patty looks past her martini glass to the pale skin       where her wedding ring once stood.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     He did get so much cuter

     over the years. I wonder

     if he’s taken.

 

              JESSICA

     You should find out, now

     that you’re single again.

Patty appears bothered by the comment and tries to   brush it off.

 

              PATTY

     Please.

    

              JESSICA

     Speaking of that, why

     haven’t we seen your

     Romeo with the wonderful

     Miranda Oleon?

 

              PATTY

     Hopefully they got lost.

 

She holds up her empty glass with an olive circling the bottom.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)     

     I gotta get another

     drink. Can I get you

     something?

 

              JESSICA

      Sure.

 

She takes a gulp.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I know I just started

     this one, but waiting for

     her to bring them can  

     take all night.

 

Jessica points toward the waitress while holding up her glass.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I’ll take a refill, and

     while you’re up, see if

     that guy is still staring

     over here.

 

A STRANGER in a baseball cap with a dark beard and   mustache sits in the opposite corner at a high top     table, drinking beer from a mug.

 

He is the only one in the room not dressed for the   occasion. He wears a loose fitting flannel shirt with   blue jeans and sneakers.

 

His head turns slightly when the girls peek over at him. He laughs to himself while putting his mug down.   He wipes his mouth with his sleeve.

             

              PATTY

     He is.

 

Patty stands up and walks toward the bar.

 

Jessica sits glancing around the room. She holds on to    her glass.    

 

TWO OLD CLASSMATES walk by the table. Jessica sips   through her stirrer.

 

The female, a bit heavy and bubbly holds a plate with     a piece of cake on it. The male, a little flabby,     balding, with a big smile holds a glass of soda with a thick straw sticking out of it. 

 

              CLASSMATE 1

     Hi Jessica. How have you

     been?

 

Classmate 1 Shakes Jessica’s hand. They don’t make eye    contact.

 

              CLASSMATE 2

     The years seem to have

     agreed with you.

 

Classmate 2 looks at classmate 1 and smiles.

 

              JESSICA

     Hello. Thank you. It sure

     has been a long time.

 

              CLASSMATE 1

     It’s me, DEVON. And you

     remember ANDY.

 

Devon points with her plate toward Andy who stands   eagerly wanting to shake Jessica’s hand. He puts his hand out slowly and pulls it back quickly when noticing the time isn’t right.

 

              JESSICA

     Oh of course. You didn’t

     have to tell me. It was

     on the tip of my tongue.

     Hello again Debra.

 

Devon is obviously annoyed.

 

              DEVON

     It’s Devon.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m sorry. I meant Devon.

 

Jessica tries to hold back a giggle before turning to     Andy.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     And it is great to see

     you again sir.

 

              ANDY

     Andy.

 

              JESSICA

     Yes, Andy.

 

Jessica finally shakes his hand not having a clue    as to who either one of them are. Her mouth opens to   begin a conversation as Patty returns.

 

              PATTY

     Here ya go Jes. Tell me

     if it’s too strong. I’ll

     take it back.

 

Patty steps back when noticing Devon and Andy.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Wow! Hello Devon. You did

     a great job arranging the

     reunion. 

 

She kisses Devon on the cheek.

              DEVON

     Thank you Patty. You look

     wonderful.

 

Her smile suddenly fades to a frown.

 

              DEVON (CONT.)

     Sorry about you and Al.

 

              PATTY

     Oh please, don’t worry

     about it.

 

Patty hides her sadness and becomes up beat.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     It was bound to happen

     sooner or later.

    

She continues her poor acting and smiles to Andy.

    

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Hey Andy! It’s been so

     long.

    

She kisses Andy on the cheek.

 

              DEVON

     We’ll see you before the

     night is over.

 

              ANDY

     Great seeing you. Both of

     you.

 

Andy and Devon begin to walk away.    Devon whispers to him.

 

              DEVON

     Patty is so nice.

     Jessica hasn’t changed

     a bit though.

 

Andy nods.

 

Devon holds her plate to Andy.

 

              DEVON (CONT.)

     Banana nut. It’s good.

     Want a taste?

 

Patty watches them walk away.

 

Jessica lifts her head from searching her purse,     places her lipstick container on the table, picks up her glass, and looks to Patty.

 

              JESSICA

     How do you remember all

     of these people? I

     couldn’t even remember

     their names back in

     school.

 

Jessica puts the empty glass down, picks up the full

one and wipes the bottom of it with a napkin.

 

              PATTY

     It’s not hard to do.

 

Patty looks down.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     You didn’t have a hard

     time remembering Andy’s

     name ten years ago.

 

Jessica looks back at Patty.

 

              JESSICA

     Sorry, did you say

     something?

 

She begins applying a fresh coat of lipstick.

 

              PATTY

     How is it they know all

     about Al and me when it’s

     been less than two weeks?

 

              JESSICA

     That’s high school gossip

     for ya.

 

              PATTY

     I thought that ended

     after high school.

 

Patty picks up her glass, looks annoyed.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Is the drink too strong?    

 

Jessica leans forward to sip the drink through the   stirrer.

             

              JESSICA

     It’s perfect. Thanks.

    

              PATTY

     Great.

 

She looks around the room again.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     And you know who, is

     still lurking through the

     dark sunglasses.

 

Patty’s eyes stop to focus on the man at the high top         table.

 

He gently nods his head to the music then picks his mug up once again.

 

              JESSICA

     Who the hell is he? Did

     he graduate with us? He

     looks psycho.

 

Jessica puts her lipstick away and straightens herself    in her seat.

 

They are both bothered by the man's presence. Patty fiddles with a napkin. Jessica, a drink glass.

    

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     We’ve already seen

     everyone we came to see.

    

 

              PATTY

     I guess we should be

     leaving after this drink

     anyway.

 

Patty takes a sip of her drink almost finishing it.

             

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Do you want to go

     someplace else? Or home?

 

Patty holds back a yawn.

 

              JESSICA

     I feel like going home.

    

She looks down and grabs her purse.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Unless you want to do

     something?

 

She stands up.

 

The man in the dark glasses stands up for the first time all night.

 

Patty becomes nervous.

 

              PATTY

     Don’t look now, but it

     seems our friend wants to

     leave with us.

 

              JESSICA

     Should we get one of the

     guys to walk us to the

     car?

 

Jessica fiddles with her car keys at the edge of the      table. She tries to be courageous.

         

              PATTY

     Good thinking.

 

Patty looks back over at the man.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

Too late. Here he comes.

 

The man puts his hand on the table and leans to the       side.

 

              STRANGER

     Pardon me ladies. Are you

     leaving?

 

              JESSICA

     I’m afraid so. We have a

     lot to do tomorrow.

 

Jessica attempts to walk away as the man grabs her   arm.

 

Patty looks to the men across the room. They continue     they’re singing and dancing.

 

She looks to the bartender. He is busy taking drink orders.

 

She looks around for the waitress, she is no where to     be found.

 

The strangers face gets closer to Jessica’s. Jessica      stands her ground.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Get your filthy

     disgusting paws off of me

     before I call those guys

     over here to take you

     outside.

 

She points to the group of men across the room drinking and laughing. None of them notice.

 

              STRANGER

     Spoken like a true bar

     chick.

 

The man begins to take his hat and glasses off.

 

Patty stands frozen with fear.

         

              STRANGER (CONT.)

     You’ll never change Jes.

 

Patty looks somewhat relieved.   

 

Jessica has a confused look.

 

              JESSICA

     How’d you know my name?

    

Jessica watches as the stranger takes off his mustache    and beard.

 

Both Patty and Jessica have an anxious look.

 

The stranger holds his disguise to his side and      laughs.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Oh my God!

 

The stranger’s arms are out to his sides. He smiles very wide.

 

              STRANGER

     Remember me?

 

              PATTY

     You son of a bitch! You

     scared the hell out of

     us!

    

Patty laughs. She hits the stranger on his arm.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Bruce Denzbar!

 

              JESSICA

     Denzbar? How have you

     been?

    

Jessica laughs with her hand on her chest waiting for     her heart to go back to normal.

 

Patty waves to get the attention of the waitress.

 

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     We thought we saw

     everyone. I guess we

     forgot about you.

 

              DENZBAR

     Gee, thanks.

 

He leans over, gives them each a hug in turn.  

 

He holds one of Patty’s hands and takes a step back.

 

              DENZBAR (CONT.)

     You’re looking good

     Patty.

    

He has a lovable smirk.

 

              DENZBAR (CONT.)

     Really good.

    

              PATTY

     Thanks.

 

              DENZBAR

     That Al’s a lucky man.

 

              JESSICA

     He sure is.

 

Patty makes a displeased face.

 

The three of them sit back down as the waitress sets      them up with another round.

 

Jessica throws her car keys back down on the table.

             

 

INT. APARTMENT – MORNING

 

     Jessica’s keys rattle against the door.    She enters a bit wobbly.

 

     At the end of a long dark hallway is her made bed    covered with pillows.

 

                   JESSICA

          That’s what I need.

 

     She rubs her neck and places her belongings down.

 

                   JESSICA (CONT.)

          Wait for me right there

          bed.

 

                    INTRUDER

     Okay Jessica.

 

Jessica freezes in place. She mutters.

 

              JESSICA

     An intruder? A burglar?

     How does he know my name?

    

The intruder has a comforting tone.

             

              INTRUDER

     Relax sweetheart. I’m not

     here to harm you. I just

     want to talk.

 

His shadow is visible in the bedroom from the hallway.    He picks up an object.

 

Jessica becomes frightened.

 

              JESSICA

     Who, who are you?

 

              INTRUDER

     Just like the old days.

     You don’t know who I am.

    

He laughs.

 

               INTRUDER (CONT.)

     It feels so familiar. You

     used to hurt my feelings

     like that back then too.

 

Jessica takes two steps back, feeling for the   phone.

 

The shadow sits calm.

 

Jessica peeks around the corner with phone in   hand.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m really sorry if I did

     that. Tell me who you are

     so I can see if I recall you.

 

              INTRUDER

     Please, have a seat with

     me. You don’t have to

     call the police.

 

She lowers the phone down to her side.

 

The intruder appears sitting on the bed holding open      their high school year book. He is the same age as    Jessica but looks a lot younger. He is dressed in a grey suit.

 

              INTRUDER (CONT.)

     Let me bring you back to

     the ninth grade. Do you

     have time?

             

Jessica stands before the bedroom door ready to      dial.    

 

              JESSICA

      I would really like to

     get some rest. I was up

     all night.

 

The intruder smiles. He looks up at her trustfully.

 

              INTRUDER

     I know.

 

He looks back to the book and turns a page.

 

              INTRUDER (CONT.)

     That was some party.

 

He turns another page.

 

              INTRUDER (CONT.)

     Nice to see old friends.

 

              JESSICA

     You were there?

 

                  INTRUDER

      You wouldn’t remember if

     you saw me anyway.

 

Jessica takes another step.

 

The intruder makes some room for her to sit next to him.

 

She sits.

 

              JESSICA

     That’s not true. I

     remembered lots of

     people there.

 

She looks at the open year book.

 

              JESSICA

      Ninth grade you say? What

     about it?

 

The intruder stands up and walks over to the chair. He    sits and leans back.

 

Jessica is startled by his sudden movement. She      clenches her fists and arms.

 

The year book remains open on the bed.

 

              INTRUDER

     That’s the team spirit.

 

He grins and reminisces.

 

              INTRUDER (CONT.)

     Let’s see. Someone didn’t

     do their math homework.

    

He gives her a shameful look while rubbing one of his     fingers across the top of the other.

FLASHBACK

 

INT. CLASSROOM – DAY

 

     A YOUNG JESSICA sits in front of a YOUNGER VERSION of     the INTRUDER.

 

     The teacher points to young Jessica and then turns to     the blackboard.

 

              INTRUDER’S VOICE

     She was called by the

     teacher to answer one of

     the questions. Looking

     worried and afraid, that

     girl would have gotten her

     last warning in that class

     and would have had to

     spend the summer in school.

     Remembering yet?

 

Young intruder holds a piece of paper. Taps young    Jessica’s arm from behind.

                  

              JESSICA’S VOICE

     I didn’t spend any time in

     summer school.

         

              INTRUDER’S VOICE

     Exactly.

 

Young Jessica turns around and takes the page.

 

              INTRUDER’S VOICE (CONT.)

     That’s because your good

     friend BOBBY OLSEN handed

     you his homework

     assignment with all of

     the correct answers on it.

 

Young Jessica reads from the page with a smile.

 

Young intruder smiles.

 

              INTRUDER’S VOICE (CONT.)

     You were saved from

     summer school.

                  JESSICA’S VOICE

     I don’t remember a friend

     by that name.

 

BACK TO SCENE

 

Jessica curls her lip.

 

              JESSICA

     I do recall being helped

     out from time to time.

    

She places her hand on her knee.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Does it make me a bad

     person for not knowing

     exactly who did it, and

     when?

 

              INTRUDER

      Does it make you feel

     like a bad person?

 

Jessica hesitates. Her voice unsure.

         

                  JESSICA

     No, not really. I guess

     not.

 

The intruder becomes pleasant.

 

              INTRUDER

     How about when the same

     kid who helped you out of

     that jam asked if you

     wanted to sit with him at

     lunch?

 

His pleasantness turns to sarcasm.

 

              INTRUDER (CONT.)

     Do you remember that?

Jessica cringes.

    

              JESSICA

     What did I say to him?

She fears his answer.

 

                  INTRUDER

     You didn’t say anything.

 

Jessica becomes surprised.

 

              JESSICA

     Why not?

 

              INTRUDER

     You were not able to

     speak because you were

     laughing too hard.

 

              JESSICA

      I can’t believe that.

 

She attempts to look into his eyes.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Wait a second. How do you

     know all of this about

     me?

 

She challenges him. Fear gone.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Why would you remember

     such details of my life?

 

The room goes silent. A calm breeze shakes the curtains in the living room.

 

He looks right into her eyes.

              

              INTRUDER

     Not just your life. I

     remember because I am

     Bobby Olsen.

    

He speaks softly.

 

              INTRUDER (CONT.)

     Those are the details

     from my life too.

 

Jessica’s head sinks downward. First looking to the floor, then to the year book. She slowly turns a page.

 

              INTRUDER (CONT.)

     You won’t find it in

     there.

 

              JESSICA

     Find what?

 

The page is turned where the face of MIRANDA OLEON is     seen. Her quote is under her picture.

 

“The years pass by so fast. The fun doesn’t seem to last. Where we go from here we must decide on our own. Trying not to end up all alone.”

 

              BOBBY

     My picture.

 

              JESSICA

     Why not?

 

              BOBBY

     I didn’t want to be part

     of the bad memories from

     that school.

 

He looks at Miranda’s picture.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Miranda’s a good kid. I

     didn’t expect to see her

     so soon.

 

Jessica looks unsure.

 

              JESSICA

     She’s great.

 

Bobby makes a face. He knows she’s lying and doesn’t      know Miranda.

 

He leans forward and takes her hand.

 

 

 

              BOBBY

     After the embarrassment

     of that lunch incident, I

     tried to avoid you for

     the rest of the school

     year. I sat behind you in

     that math class in

     complete frustration.

 

Bobby lets go of her hand.

 

Jessica wipes a tear.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

      You didn’t even know I

     was there except for once

     or twice when Patty would

     pass me a note to pass to

     you. Those notes were the

     highlight of my school

     days.

 

Jessica pulls his hand back into hers. She sobs.

 

              JESSICA

     I am so sorry.

 

Bobby takes a tighter grip of her hand.

 

              BOBBY

     I dreamt about you that

     whole summer. It was me

     who kept you out of

     summer school. If not

     for that move, you may

     not have met Chad.

 

Jessica lets go of his hand surprised.

 

              JESSICA

     He didn’t even go to our

     school.

 

              BOBBY

     How could I forget him?

     He hogged you that entire

     summer.

Bobby stands and slowly sits next to Jessica.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Now we know you can

     remember certain people.

 

He laughs.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     I can recall him driving

     you around in that Chevy

     Nova. He’s the one that

     inspired me to start

     saving for a car.

 

              JESSICA

     Did you ever get one?

 

Bobby tilts his head stunned.

 

              BOBBY

     I did. You didn’t seem to

     care for it though.

 

              JESSICA

     Oh c’mon.

 

Bobby looks at the clock. 8:47 AM.

 

              BOBBY    

     You’ll probably need your

     sleep now. I should get

     going.

 

Bobby stands, walks to the door.

 

Jessica stands, walks closely behind him.

 

Bobby stops in the hallway looking at pictures on the     wall.

 

There is one of Jessica and Patty, next to it a      photo of a man and a dog, next to that, two women    wearing name tags MITZY and PEARL.

 

The photo appears to be taken in a department store behind a perfume counter.

There is another woman behind the two whose face     appears extra clear.

    

Bobby stops to examine the woman’s face while Jessica     continues. She smiles.  

 

              JESSICA

     Such a quick visit? Will

     you come back so we can

     talk some more?

 

                  BOBBY

     If you’d like.

 

He smiles and points to the picture on the wall.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Who are these ladies?

 

Jessica looks at the picture. She points to the women     one at a time.    

 

              JESSICA

     That’s Mitzy, and that’s

     Pearl.

 

She laughs.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Can’t you read the name

     tags?

 

              BOBBY

     You’re funny. I saw that

     much.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m just playing. They

     work at the counters

     across from mine at the

     department store.

 

Bobby takes another look at the woman in the    background.

 

              BOBBY

     I see.

              JESSICA

     Are you sure you can’t

     stay a little while?

    

He takes his eyes off of the picture and looks at    another clock. 8:52 AM.

 

              BOBBY

     It’s almost nine o’clock.

     I’d like to get to

     church.

    

He turns to walk away stops, his back to her.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     You can join me, but I

     know you haven’t slept

     yet.

 

He continues walking to the front door as Jessica    stands near the bedroom. She calls out to him.

 

              JESSICA

     You’re right. I have to

     get some sleep, but if

     you’re free tonight,

     stop by!

 

              BOBBY

     Thanks. I’ll think about

     it.

 

He closes the front door behind him.

 

 

INT. APARTMENT – CONT.

 

Jessica picks up the year book.

             

              JESSICA

      What a nice guy, and he

     goes to church.

 

She looks around the room.

 

 

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I know I have a bible

     around here somewhere.

     Too bad I can’t find it.

     That would have been nice

     for him to see.

 

She makes her way to the window and watches Bobby    walk down the street.

 

Her hand makes a fist and attempts to knock on the   glass.

 

Her fist unclenches, she brings it back.

 

She closes the curtains, walks to the bed, shuts the      light, and closes the year book. Her head hits the    pillow.

 

The bedroom shade is closed, a ray of sun light shines    in from the living room window. It puts a glare on the wood coffee table in the living room. Underneath is a   pile of old magazines and newspapers. A couple of      books are also in view.

 

The side of a book entitled THE CEMETERY FENCE is    revealed above a thicker book entitled THE HOLY BIBLE.               

INT. CHURCH – MORNING

 

     From the rear of the church the altar is in view as loud organ music plays.

 

     THE HOLY BIBLE is seen from the side in the hand of an    OLD TIMER one row up. The old timer turns around     slightly and smiles.

 

     The backs of men in suits and women in Sunday dresses     are seen as THE PRIEST stands up and holds his arms    out.

 

     He makes his way toward the microphone.

 

     The organ music stops.

 

 

 

                   PRIEST

          In our reading from

          ISAIAH 37:18 20 when it

          says, It is true, O Lord,

          that the Assyrian kings

          have laid waste all these

          peoples and their lands.

          They have thrown their

          gods into the fire and

          destroyed them, for they

          were not gods but only

          wood and stone, fashioned

          by human hands. Now O

          Lord our God, deliver us

          from his hand, so that

          kingdoms on earth may

          know that you alone, O

          Lord, are God.

 

     He looks around slowly.

 

                   PRIEST (CONT.)

          Is it telling us not to

          take precious goods and

          throw them away?

 

     The people are silent.

 

                   PRIEST (CONT.)

          Is it telling us that the

          former gods were hand

          made and of less value

          than the Lord?

 

     His hands are raised again welcoming.

                  

                   PRIEST (CONT.)

          In a way it may be giving

          a message of how these

          Assyrian kings did not

          look after their

          followers as they should

          have.

 

     Slowly he drops his hands to his side. He takes in   the group before him.

 

                   PRIEST (CONT.)

          Each reading has many

          meanings. I bring up the

          throwing away of precious

          goods metaphor only to

          enlighten some of the

          younger ones here today.

 

     He smiles.

 

                   PRIEST (CONT.)

          That’s not saying that

          some of us older ones

          can’t use a lesson on

          taking good care of our

          precious gifts.

 

     Laughter is heard around the room.

    

     The cross is visible above the altar.

 

                   PRIEST (CONT.)

          Remember the young ones.

          Remember to cherish your

          precious gifts. Teach the

          youngsters to help the

          needy.

 

     A statue of Mother Mary is off to the side.

 

     An altar boy stands behind the altar.

 

                   PRIEST (CONT.)

          Now let’s offer each other

          a sign of peace.  

 

     The OLD TIMER turns around. He extends his hand.

 

                   OLD TIMER

          Peace be with you.

 

     His BIBLE is visible.  

                       

INT. BEDROOM – AFTERNOON

 

A BIBLE rests under the coffee table.

 

Jessica lifts her head from the pillow and notices the    year book. She slowly rises and rubs her eyes.

 

              JESSICA

     What a night. I think I

     drank a little too much.

 

She sits at the edge of the bed and yawns.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Those were some strange

     dreams about acting so

     cruel to that guy.

 

She stands up, walks to the window. She looks out. A      Nova is parked down the block under a tree.

 

She turns around. The clock reads 2:55PM.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Wow. I slept the whole

     day away.

 

She takes another look at the year book, picks it up.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     What a precious gift this

     turned out to be. 

 

She places it gently on the bed, walks to the desk, picks up the phone receiver.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

      Hi Patty. How are you

     feeling? Did you get any

     sleep?

    

EXT. DECK – AFTERNOON

 

INTERCUT

 

Patty stands outside her apartment door. She has the      phone in one hand and a cup of coffee in the other.     She is covered by a white robe with the ties dangling.

 

 

 

              PATTY

      Hi Jes. I fell asleep as

     soon as I got home.  I

     just woke up a little

     while ago.

 

Patty looks over at her bed. A body rolls over under the covers.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Um, how about you?

 

              JESSICA

     Uh, same here. I’ve never

     felt so tired.

 

Patty holds the receiver between her shoulder and    cheek. She waves the robe tie with her free hand.

    

              PATTY

     I guess we’re getting too

     old to do those high

     school type things like

     we used to. Is everything

     okay? You don’t sound like

     yourself.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m fine.

 

She clears her throat.

             

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     What’d you think about

     that Denzbar stunt?

     Pretty strange huh?

 

               PATTY

     Very strange.

She looks back at the bed.

 

              JESSICA

     I think he was coming on

     to me.

 

Patty puts her hand over the phone.

 

              PATTY

     Why do you say that?

 

              JESSICA

     The way he kept looking

     at me and stuff. I can

     tell when a guy is

     interested.

    

Patty is taken aback.

 

              PATTY

     Really?

         

              JESSICA

     You should know that

     about me by now.

 

She pauses briefly.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     What are you doing today?

 

              PATTY

     I’m not sure.

 

              JESSICA

     Now you don’t sound

     right. Is everything

     okay?

 

              PATTY

     Fine. Everything’s good.

 

              JESSICA

     If you say so.

 

She quickly changes the subject.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)   

     Well I’m just running out   

     to get some groceries. We

     can talk later.

 

              PATTY

     That would be perfect.

     Talk to you later Jes.

Patty hangs up quickly and looks over at the bed.

A loud yawn comes from under the covers.

 

Patty hurries over, she puts the coffee down on the table and jumps into the bed.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Boy are you loud in the

     morning. You could have

     given us up.

 

She pulls the covers off Denzbar. He lifts his head       and pulls Patty closer.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Jessica knows you like

     her.

 

He has a sleepy and confused stare.

 

              DENZBAR

     What?

 

              PATTY

     She just told me that she

     can tell when a guy is

     interested. And you were

     interested.

 

              DENZBAR

     Too bad she can’t tell

     when she hurts a guy’s

     feelings.

 

Patty pushes Denzbar’s hair back.

 

              PATTY

     Hey, she’s still my

     friend.

 

              DENZBAR

     Mine too.

    

He fixes the pillow behind his head.

 

              DENZBAR (CONT.)

     My very shallow friend.

Patty can’t help but laugh.

 

              PATTY

     Everyone has their

     downfalls.

 

She looks away.

         

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Mine was Al.

 

She reaches over for her coffee. Denzbar cracks a    smile.

 

              DENZBAR

     He’s still my friend too.

 

              PATTY

     You’re funny.

 

She takes a sip of coffee.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Jes isn’t that bad.

 

              DENZBAR

     I can’t agree totally.

     She doesn’t even seem to

     remember May nineteenth.

 

Patty is overcome.

 

              PATTY

     I still can’t hear about

     that.

She covers her ears.

 

              PATTY (CONT.)

     Change the subject.

 

              DENZBAR

     Sorry. Maybe she remembers,

     maybe she just blocks it

     out like us sympathetic

     people try to do but can’t.

 

FLASHBACK. EXT. LAKE – NIGHT

     Complete silence. Moon light shines on the calm water.

 

     Police lights flash. Two men dressed in dark clothing     walk away from the lake.

 

     A man and a woman embrace crying. People walk slowly      by with their heads hung low.

 

     A set of car keys drops to the ground.              

 

INT. APARTMENT – EVENING

 

     Jessica’s keys dangle from her fingers and fall to   the hallway table. Her hands are full of grocery bags. She rushes to the kitchen.

    

     Once the bags are placed down safely, she hurry’s to      the bathroom.

    

     Toilet flushes.

 

     Jessica fixes her belt walking.

 

     Bobby stands in the doorway between the    living room   and the kitchen, a big grin on his face.

 

     He waits until Jessica is a couple of steps from the      doorway.

 

                   BOBBY

          Did you want to hear

          about the tenth grade?

 

     She takes a step back.

 

                   JESSICA

          I have to get into the

          habit of locking that

          door.

 

     She walks over and begins to empty a grocery bag.

 

                   JESSICA (CONT.)

          I was hoping you would

          stop by.

 

     She turns towards him and smiles.

                   JESSICA (CONT.)

          How was church?

 

                   BOBBY

          Very refreshing. The

          priest had some very

          interesting points of

          view.

 

     He steps toward the kitchen counter.

 

                   BOBBY (CONT.)

          The older man right in

          front of me seemed to

          enjoy it as much as I

          did.

 

     Bobby goes through one of the grocery bags.

 

                   BOBBY (CONT.)

          How was your day? I see

          you took care of the

          shopping.

 

     He puts some items in the refrigerator.

 

                   JESSICA

          What a nightmare. I hate

          that supermarket.

 

                   BOBBY

      As much as you hate

     banana nut cake?

 

Bobby looks up while leaning in the refrigerator.

Jessica hands him a can of tomato juice.

 

              JESSICA

     How did you know that?

 

She hands Bobby the last two items, places the bag on     the floor.

 

She takes two glasses from the dish drain.

 

 

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Did I mention that back

     in school also?

 

She pours two lemonades.

 

Bobby stands up, closes the refrigerator door and    sits at the kitchen table.

 

Jessica hands him a glass, sits across from him.

 

                BOBBY

     Thanks.

 

He takes a sip.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Devon McGee’s sixteenth

     birthday. Do you remember

     her?

 

              JESSICA

     You have to forgive me.

     I’m bad with names.

 

              BOBBY

     That’s where I found out

     that you hate banana nut

     cake.

 

He takes another sip and puts the glass down.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Devon on the other hand

     loved it. Still does.  

 

              JESSICA

     I think I heard the name

     before.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

              BOBBY    

     You gotta remember some

     names. What about that

     blonde haired kid that

     used to be the

     quarterback for the

     football team? He used to

     lift weights in the gym

     basement? 

 

Jessica cuts him off.

           

                  JESSICA

     Andy Pennadill!

 

She is starry eyed.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I could never forget him.

         

              BOBBY

      I rest my case. Andy was

     at that party. You didn’t

     seem to remember him last

     night.

 

                  JESSICA

     I can’t imagine why not.

 

Bobby is appalled.

 

              BOBBY

     Because he wasn’t dressed

     flashy and was balding.

     He had a gut. He lost that

     athletic physique.

 

Bobby stands up. Looks down at her.

                      

 

                  BOBBY (CONT.)

      You haven’t changed so

     much since the tenth

     grade. You have a long

     way to go to become that

     better person.

 

He walks to the sink, puts his glass down and leans against the counter.

 

FLASHBACK

 

INT. SCHOOL – DAY

 

Young Jessica and a small group of kids are gathered      by lockers.

 

Young Bobby approaches. He looks to young Jessica.

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

     I remember giving myself

     another shot with you. I

     asked you to go bowling

     and do you know what you

     told me?

 

Young Bobby speaks to her. She covers her mouth.

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

      I should spend more time

     shopping for decent

     clothes and less time at

     the bowling alley.

 

Young Bobby is sad. The kids laugh.

    

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

     Do you remember what

     you’re friend Don asked

     me?

 

One of the boys in the group calls to young Bobby as      he begins to walk off.

 

              JESSICA’S VOICE

     What?

    

Young Bobby turns around. The boy speaks.

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE

      He said, don’t you need

     balls to go bowling?

    

Young Bobby turns back around. His head sinks.

The group laughs.

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

     All of your friends

     laughed as I stood there.

     It felt like I was

     standing there for hours.

     All of you walked away as

     if I was not human.

 

All but one in the group continue to laugh.

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

     That feeling hung over me

     for most of that year.

     Being put aside like that

     in front of the girl I

     wanted more than anything

     was the worst part.

 

Young Bobby wipes his eye. Walks off with hand in    pocket.

 

BACK TO SCENE

 

Bobby walks away from the sink, hand in pocket.

                       

EXT. CONVENIENCE STORE – NIGHT

 

Denzbar walks to his car. He wears a light leather   jacket and black jeans. He puts his hand in his front pant pocket, a grubby man approaches.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Please tell me I have a

          quarter for this bum.

 

     The man is close enough to touch him. He has a brown      bag in his hand and a lit cigarette hanging from his lip.

 

                   BUM

          What’s the matter Bruce?

          Don’t want anyone to

          think you know me?

 

     His cigarette falls out of his mouth. He lets out a cough.

 

                   BUM (CONT.)

          Damn!

    

     Denzbar puts the quarter back in his pocket.

 

                   DENZBAR

          I don’t think I do know

          you. Can you give me a

          hint?

                  

                   BUM

          I may be down on my luck

          but I ain’t stupid Bruce.

          I know a bunch of you’s

          are still lingering

          around from that

          senseless reunion the

          other night. And some

          of you’s reunited a

          little more than others.

 

     Denzbar looks impatient. He puts his bag in the      opposite hand.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Sir. May I ask what you

          are getting at?

 

     The bum lights another cigarette.

             

                   BUM

          My wife! The two of you

          hitting it off pretty

          well, huh?

 

     Denzbar has a look of fear and surprise.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Al? Is that you?

 

                   AL

          The one and only!

 

     Al extends his arms out to the sides.

     Denzbar takes a step back, his mouth hung open.

 

     Al puts his arms down and extends his hand to shake Denzbar’s.

 

                   AL (CONT.)

          It’s okay Bruce. You

          don’t know the whole

          story.

 

     Denzbar is shaken.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Do you need a ride or

          something?

 

     Denzbar opens the driver door.

                       

     They both sit inside.

 

                   DENZBAR (CONT.)

          I’m sorry things didn’t

          work out with you and

          Patty.

 

     Denzbar fixes his seat belt and rattles his keys.

 

                   DENZBAR (CONT.)

          She said Miranda had

          something to do with it.

 

     He starts up the car and checks the mirrors.    Soft      music plays.

    

     He backs the car out of its spot.

 

 

                   AL

          She had everything to do

          with it. It started with

          coffee and then things

          just got crazy.

 

     Denzbar pulls on to the road.

 

 

 

                   DENZBAR

          Crazy where you start

          talking to yourself and

          people outside notice?

 

     Denzbar takes his eyes off the road for a moment.

 

                   DENZBAR (CONT.)

          That’s what she told me.

 

     Al looks disturbed. He turns down the radio.   

 

INT. KITCHEN – NIGHT

 

Bobby holds Jessica’s hand while they sit at the     table. Her head slowly rises. They laugh.

 

              BOBBY

     Don’t feel bad. Tenth

     grade wasn’t all misery.

     There were a couple of

     happy times.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m just so sorry for the

     times that weren’t so

     happy.

         

              BOBBY

     You’ll make up for that.

    

He lets go of her hand and smiles.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     If not for the reunion

     and me coming here to

     reminisce with you, I

     never would have thought

     of the good things that I

     sorta didn’t pay much

     attention to back then.

 

Jessica has a comfortable look.

 

              JESSICA

     Really?

 

Bobby nods.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     Like what?

 

              BOBBY

     Like Bruce and the burger

     Kraffs. We’d sit there

     for hours some nights

     just watching the stars,

     chewing, talking about

     the future or anything

     and everything that came

     up. 

 

Jessica nods.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Just some silly things

     that make you realize

     that you had a friend.

 

He puts his head half way down.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Things that make you

     think twice about your

     decisions.

 

Jessica stands up.

    

              JESSICA

     Let me get you some more

     lemonade.

 

Bobby stands.     

 

              BOBBY

     That’s okay. I have to

     get going so you can get

     some sleep before work.

 

Bobby makes his way toward the door.

 

He stops in the hallway, looks at the woman in the   background of the picture again.

 

Jessica puts the glasses in the sink and follows him.

 

He quickly looks away from the picture.

 

              JESSICA

     When should I expect you

     back?

 

Bobby holds the door open.

 

              BOBBY

     Tomorrow night, if you

     leave this unlocked.

 

He lets the door shut behind him.

 

Jessica stands and stares at the door for a moment. 

 

She walks over to the bedroom window. She clears some     frost to watch Bobby walk down the street.

                       

INT. CAR – NIGHT

 

Al wipes the frost off of the windshield.

 

Denzbar and Al sit under a sign, KRAFF’S BURGERS.

 

Denzbar pulls a hamburger out of a bag and offers one     to Al.

 

              DENZBAR

     Ready for another?

 

Al grabs the burger and grunts.

 

              DENZBAR (CONT.)

     Look, if it’s that weird

     you don’t have to tell me

     what freaked you about

     Miranda.

 

Denzbar holds a hamburger wrapper out of the window.

 

              AL

     I’d really rather not go

     into the details right

     now.

              DENZBAR

     I won’t see Patty tonight

     if you’d rather I didn’t.

 

Al chews as pieces of food fall on his lap.

 

              AL

     Don’t be silly. Talk to

     her. Maybe you can fix it.

         

              DENZBAR

     I don’t know about fixing

     it. I can try, but I

     can’t promise anything.

 

Denzbar drops the wrapper out of the window     accidentally.

 

              DENZBAR (CONT.)

     Dammit!

 

He quickly opens the door and steps out before the   wrapper can blow away.

 

Al watches him, mumbling.

 

              AL

     Sleep with my wife you

     rat. How was she? You’re

     a real great friend.

 

Denzbar sits back down and closes the door.

 

              DENZBAR

     I hate to litter.

 

He tosses the KRAFF’S wrapper into the back seat.

 

              DENZBAR (CONT.)

     Were you saying

     something?

    

              AL

     I’m glad we are friends.

 

There is an awkward pause.

 

              DENZBAR

     Me too. It’s probably

     better if I do the Patty

     talk tomorrow though.

 

Al continues to chew as he wipes the frost off of the     windshield again.   

 

INT. STORE – MORNING

 

Jessica cleans off the glass top of her jewelry      counter while speaking with MITZY and PEARL. Both in     their late fifties. All wearing name tags.

 

              MITZY

     He sounds like a keeper.

     Besides, it seems like

     you owe him something.

 

              JESSICA

     And when he saw the

     picture of you two in my

     apartment, he was pretty

     fixated on it.

 

              MITZY

     Then he’s definitely a

     keeper.

 

Mitzy giggles, three fingers over her lips.

 

              PEARL

     You have to come back and

     tell us his rendition of

     the eleventh grade.

    

Pearl sprays her perfume counter and wipes it.

 

Jessica steps out from behind her counter and closer      to Pearl’s.

 

              PEARL (CONT.)

     What are you expecting?

    

               JESSICA

      I’m afraid to find out

     what harm I caused there.

Pearl and Mitzy both look to Jessica.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)   

     Going over all of the

     events has sparked my

     memory a bit.

 

The ladies look intrigued as Jessica smiles.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     If Bobby is the same guy

     I am thinking of, I think

     he might be the one that

     did something really big

     right before graduation.

     I just can’t remember

     what that was.

 

Jessica leans on Pearl’s counter, her fist under her      chin. Mitzy raises her eyebrows.

 

              MITZY

     Maybe he got a great job

     and made lots of money.

She closes her eyes and makes fists. She smiles.

 

              MITZY (CONT.)

     Or went to college and

     became a super athlete?

 

              JESSICA

     I don’t think so. I

     probably would have

     remembered that.

 

               PEARL

     Maybe he did something

     for you.

 

She places a perfume bottle in her case.

 

              PEARL (CONT.)

     Do you recall flowers?

     Gifts? A letter?

 

 

 

              JESSICA

     I did receive some of

     those things from time to

     time. Maybe he was one of

     the one’s who sent them

     to me.

 

She scratches her head and squints.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I thought it was

     something bigger than

     that though.

 

The phone behind Jessica’s counter rings. Jessica    turns her head.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     That’s mine girls. I’ll

     be back.

 

Jessica runs to her counter.

 

              MITZY

     I envy her situation. She

     is falling for this Bobby.

 

              PEARL

     She reminds me of when we

     were her age.

 

The two of them lean on separate counters with there      hands under their cheeks holding their heads up gazing toward Jessica.

 

Jessica picks up the phone.

 

              JESSICA

     Hello?

 

INTERCUT

 

Patty sits behind a desk in an office cubicle.

 

              PATTY

     Hi Jes. It’s me. I’m at

     work. Can you talk a sec?

              JESSICA

     Sure.

 

              PATTY

     You got me worried the

     way our conversation

     ended yesterday.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m sorry. Just something

     odd happened.

 

She looks down.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I’ve been talking to

     someone lately and I

     wasn’t sure if I was

     ready to tell you about

     it yet.

    

              PATTY

     Is everything okay?

 

              JESSICA

     Don’t worry, it’s silly.

     Maybe we can get together   

     this week? I’d like to

     run something by you.

 

              PATTY

     Of course we can get

     together. Besides,

     Denzbar called me. He

     wants the three of us to

     meet up for drinks this

     week. How does that sound?

             

              JESSICA

     That would be perfect. I

     could get his input. See

     if he can make it

     tomorrow night.

 

              PATTY

     It’s a date. And maybe I

     can run something by you.

              JESSICA

     Is everything okay?

 

              PATTY

     I think so. We’ll talk

     tomorrow.

 

              JESSICA

     Sounds good.

 

Jessica hangs up. She looks over at Pearl and Mitzy smiling at her. She whispers to herself.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     They can tell I’m falling

     for him.

                                          

INT. BASEMENT – AFTERNOON

 

A PAINED MAN close to Mitzy and Pearl in age sits on      a stool in the corner, his head in his hands.

 

The only light comes through a small window. A half filled glass sits along side a half filled bottle of    rum.

 

The man sobs as he reaches for the glass.

 

              PAINED MAN

     It’s not fair.

    

He takes a gulp of the rum. His arm trembles as he   places the glass back down on the table.

 

              PAINED MAN (CONT.)

     It could be yesterday. It

     could be twenty years ago.

 

He reaches for the glass again. He knocks the   glass to the floor.

         

              PAINED MAN (CONT.)

     Dammit!

    

He looks at the bottle, laughs.

 

         

              PAINED MAN (CONT.)

     Ah, what the hell.

 

He picks up the bottle and gulps from it as he stumbles out of his chair.

 

He walks over to the small window and looks outside.

A bench in front of a tree where a bird sits perched      whistling above.

 

A tear rolls down the mans cheek.              

 

INT. APARTMENT – DAY

 

     Patty sits on a chair, a cup of coffee in front of   her. She wears the same clothes as she wore at work. She looks upset.

 

                   PATTY

          I come home for my lunch

          hour to hear you defend

          him?

 

     Denzbar stands in the doorway facing the deck. He    wears a tee shirt and jeans. His leather jacket is on   the bed. He turns around.

 

                   DENZBAR

          The man has a decent

          gripe.

    

     He takes a step closer.

         

                   DENZBAR (CONT.)

          He’s going through some

          strange stuff here. I

          think you should listen

          to him.

 

     Patty pulls at her chin.

 

                   PATTY

          Then what happens to us?

          Where do we put that

          night?

 

     Denzbar steps closer and hugs her.

                   DENZBAR

          You can put it where you

          want. I’m keeping it in

          my heart, where only I

          can feel it again when I

          need to.

 

     Patty steps back. She looks at his face.

 

                   PATTY

          That is some pretty corny

          stuff. What’d ya think?

          It was gonna give us

          another night?

               

     Denzbar steps back. He shakes his head, then laughs.

    

                   DENZBAR

          Worth a shot.

 

                   AL’S VOICE

          I’m glad we are friends.

     Denzbar’s laugh stops, becomes serious.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Al really made me feel

          something.

         

                   PATTY

          You’re just as far out

          there as he is.

 

                   DENZBAR

          There is more to this

          Miranda thing. Al is a

          mess.

 

                   PATTY

          He’s a mess? That’s a

          good reason to give him

          another shot.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Not that kind of a mess.

 

 

 

                   PATTY

          Was he drinking and

          smoking and dirty

          looking?

 

                   DENZBAR

          Well, maybe that kind of

          a mess. Just a little

          though.

 

     He smirks, tilts his head.

 

                   DENZBAR (CONT.)

          Something is going on

          there.

 

                   PATTY

          I’d appreciate if you

          didn’t mention her name

          when you’re talking to

          me.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Done.

 

                   PATTY

          I must be out of my mind.

 

                   DENZBAR

          We all are.

 

                   PATTY

          You sleep with me and

          then want to help get us

          back together?

    

                   DENZBAR

          It sounds weird when you

          say it like that.

 

                   PATTY

          I am out of my mind.

 

EXT. PARK – DAY

 

A bird chirps from a tree above. Jessica walks taking     in the fresh air. The sun sets.

 

Up ahead, the old timer from church chases some items     that fall from his grocery bag.

 

Jessica hurries to help him. She leans down to pick up    a can of tomato juice. She hands it to him.

 

He balances his bag while putting the can back in. His    smile lights up his face.

 

Jessica secures the bag and makes sure the old timer      handles it.

 

Jessica continues.

 

They both wave goodbye.

 

She stops walking, whispers.

 

              JESSICA

     Maybe I’m becoming that

     better person.

    

She takes a step forward and smiles.

 

EXT. PORCH – DAY

 

     Denzbar and Patty end a long tight hug.    He walks down the four steps. She smiles when he looks back up at her.

 

                   PATTY

          I hope you’re right.

 

                   DENZBAR

          Trust me on this. I’m

          sure he’ll make good.

 

                   PATTY

          We’re on for drinks

          tomorrow night.

 

     Denzbar walks backwards toward his car.

 

                   DENZBAR

          You know it.

 

     He takes two more steps.

 

                   DENZBAR (CONT.)

          There’s no one I’d rather

          spend my last night in

          town with.

    

INT. APARTMENT – EVENING

 

     Jessica comes out of the bathroom followed by steam.      She wears one towel around her body and dries her hair    with another.

 

     She passes the living room and looks in.

 

     Bobby sits comfortably on her sofa, the television on.

 

              BOBBY

     Good evening beautiful.

 

              JESSICA

     Oh, you scared me.

 

She makes sure her towel covers everything while     smiling brightly.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     This time I left the door

     open on purpose. I was

     thinking about you on my

     walk home.

 

Bobby rests his glass of lemonade on the table.

 

              BOBBY

     That’s nice. This is

     exactly what I used to

     dream about back in the

     old days. You coming out

     of the shower, me being

     on your mind all day, and

     us spending the evening

     together, just talking.

 

                  JESSICA

     That is so sweet.

 

She pulls the towel tighter and sits on the arm of the    couch.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I wish we began this

     relationship ten years

     earlier.

 

              BOBBY

     Are you tired of

     traveling down memory

     lane yet?

 

Bobby sits up.

 

              JESSICA

     Not at all. I was hoping

     you could get some more

     off your chest. Maybe

     your opening up can cure

     the old wounds and clear    

     a path to build something

     meaningful between us.

 

Bobby picks up the yearbook and plays with her.

 

              BOBBY

     Well, open your textbook

     to the eleventh grade.

    

He puts his hands together and tilts his head back   with the year book on his lap.

 

FLASHBACK

 

INT. SCHOOL – DAY

 

     Young Bobby and young Denzbar sit in the back of a   classroom. Other students scattered. Jessica walks in the room. All of the boys stare.

    

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

     I remember a girl who

     really grew up that

     summer. What a knock out.

     The pretty face, long,

     luxurious hair, and a

     body that all of a sudden

     brought it all together.

     You were dazzling.

 

Young Jessica sits right next to young Denzbar. The two speak. Bobby eventually joins in.

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

     Once again, I played

     the fool. I sat in the

     back of study hall when

     you walked in. That year

     we had a sort of mutual

     friend, Bruce. He let me

     join in your conversation

     for a word or two. The

     relationship with Chad

     was over and you were

     discussing what guys

     would be suitable for you

     and which girls would be

     suitable for Bruce. A

     couple of others joined

     in and it felt so good

     just to be a part of the

     same conversation as you.

     You probably don’t recall

     that either.

 

Young Jessica plays with her hair and looks at her   nails.

 

              JESSICA’S VOICE

     To tell you the truth, I

     only remember certain

     moments of that year.

     Mostly parties, sitting

     through the football

     games and doing my hair

     with some of the girls.

     Those little classroom

     talks don’t really stick

     out.

 

Young Bobby stares at Jessica.

 

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE

     Those little classroom

     talks were all that I had.

     Do you know what you said

     when it came time to pair

     me up with someone in the

     school?

 

Young Jessica speaks to young Bobby. His face drops.

 

              BOBBY’S VOICE (CONT.)

     You said that me and the

     seventy year old, angry

     lunch lady would make a

     nice couple if I was only

     three inches taller.

 

Young Bobby hangs his head. Staggers from the room.

 

BACK TO SCENE

 

Bobby hangs his head.

    

              JESSICA

     I can only say sorry so

     many times. You don’t

     know how awful I feel. I

     really want to make it

     all up to you right now

     and forever. I was

     immature. I didn’t take

     the feelings of others

     into consideration. I was

     caught up in looks, money

     and popularity. I was

     hurtful and there is no

     excuse.

 

Her head falls into her hands, she cries. Bobby      looks back up.

 

              BOBBY

     It took a long time to

     get over the sadness.

 

              JESSICA

     I guess it wasn’t easy.

              BOBBY

     The most difficult thing

     I ever did.

 

              JESSICA

     Why couldn’t you have

     made me listen back

     then?

 

              BOBBY

     That would have been

     impossible.

 

              JESSICA

     I guess you’re right.       

    

              BOBBY

     I’m over it now. No need

     to get upset.

 

He holds the yearbook up.

 

              JESSICA

     I know you may not believe

     me, but I do think you’re

     coming back to my memory.

 

              BOBBY

     Really?

 

              JESSICA

     All I can place is you

     doing something big.

 

She has a burst of excitement.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     I think it was senior

     year. I don’t know what

     it was though. Can you

     help me?

 

Bobby stands up. He takes a step toward the door.

 

 

 

 

              BOBBY

      No skipping ahead.

     Twelfth grade is tomorrow

     nights discussion.

 

Jessica stands.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m looking forward to

     that. I know it will make

     it all better.

 

She has a half smile.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     By the way, I am meeting

     with a couple of friends

     for drinks tomorrow night.

     Remember Denzbar?

 

              BOBBY

     I remember him well. He

     was our mutual friend,

     Bruce.

 

Jessica looks surprised.

 

              JESSICA

     That’s right. And my

     friend Patty that you saw

     at the party. You know

     her.

 

              BOBBY

     Sure do.

 

              JESSICA  

     If you want to join us,

     you’re welcome. If you’re

     busy, we’ll understand.

 

              BOBBY

     I don’t think I can make    

     it but I’d like you to

     give something to Patty

     for me if you don’t mind.

 

He reaches into his pocket.

         

              JESSICA

     That wouldn’t be a

     problem.

 

Bobby hands her a sealed envelope.

 

              BOBBY

     I’d like to see my dad

     while I’m back in town.

 

Jessica puts the envelope in her purse and smiles.

 

              JESSICA

     That is so nice. Where

     does he live?

 

              BOBBY

     Not too far from here.

 

He becomes visibly distraught.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     He’s not the same since

     mom left him. I want to

     lift his spirits if I

     can.

 

               JESSICA

     Your mom left him? That’s

     sad.

 

              BOBBY

     She didn’t want to. She

     had to.

 

              JESSICA

     I’m sorry.

             

              BOBBY

     It’s okay.

 

              JESSICA

     Maybe you can meet with

     Denzbar, Patty and me

     another time.

              BOBBY

     That would be real nice.

     Maybe one day.

 

He starts towards the door.

 

              JESSICA

     I shouldn’t be home too

     late! I hope you wait for

     me.

    

She waits.

 

Bobby stops to look at the picture once again.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     If you like it that much,

     you should take it with

     you.

 

Bobby looks back at her.

 

              BOBBY

     What’s that?

 

              JESSICA

     The picture of my

     co-workers.

    

Bobby continues to look at the picture.

 

              BOBBY

     Don’t be silly.

 

He looks at Jessica, then the photo.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     Do you know when it was

     taken?

 

Jessica walks toward him.

 

              JESSICA

     Turn it around. I usually

     write the date on the

     backs of my photo’s.

 

She takes the picture off the wall, opens the frame.

 

              JESSICA (CONT.)

     January sixth, only five

     weeks ago.

 

Bobby looks shocked.   

 

              BOBBY

     Wow.

 

He takes the picture and looks closely at the woman in    the background once again.

 

              JESSICA

     What’s wrong?

 

              BOBBY

     Nothing.

 

He hands the picture back.

 

              BOBBY (CONT.)

     That was a week before

     mom left dad. That’s all.

 

              JESSICA

     Um, sorry, let me just.

 

He cuts her off.

 

              BOBBY

     It’s not a big deal.

     Enjoy the get together

     tomorrow night.

 

Jessica looks at him and smiles.     

 

              JESSICA

     I’m looking forward to

     seeing them, but I’m

     looking forward to seeing

     you afterwards even more.

 

He smiles and walks out the door.

 

Jessica grabs Bobby’s lemonade glass off the table.               

INT. BASEMENT – NIGHT

 

     Pained Man grabs his glass off the table.

 

     A picture of a woman sits next to the bottle. Her face    is blurred.

 

     He glides his fingers across the picture.

 

                   PAINED MAN

          It’s not fair. Wasn’t one

          enough? What did I do?

 

     Tears roll down his face. He slams his glass on the table.

 

     Out his small window a street light glows.

 

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