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Screenplay

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

written by

 

ferf ziamond

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                                                 FADE IN
 
EXT. COURTHOUSE - SUNSET             
 

      An ANGRY MOB protests. Chants blaring, fists rising.

 

                        ANGRY MOB

            Hang the child molester!

            Execute the sex offender!

 

      A man and woman embrace to the side. MR. and MRS.   DE’MEAL.

 

      A frustrated police officer, KIP, turns from guarding   the door, it opens. A small, frightened, pig of a man   stands inside beside his dark suited attorney.

 

      The mob becomes louder and irate.

 

                        ANGRY MOB

            Death to the piece of

            garbage! Die you

            miserable pig!

 

      The door closes.

 

INT. COURTHOUSE

 

                        KIP

            Looks like you’ll be

            spending another night

            dirt bag.

     

      The attorney cuts through Kip with a stare.

 

      The mob is heard.

 

INT. DOCTOR’S OFFICE - DAY

 

      JUSTIN HAYGEN, late thirties, playful smile, average   
      height police officer, seated on examining table       fiddling with       medical equipment. 
 

            DOC enters, forties, dark, serious, gloomy.

 

                                           DOC

            Justin, how long has it

            been since you’ve been in

            to see me?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Four years I guess.

 

                        DOC

            Try eight.

 

                        JUSTIN

                               Really? Maybe I should

            change my schedule around.

    

                        DOC

            Justin, I have something

            to tell you that is not

            going to be easy.

 

            His Playful smile dissolves, intense fear.

 

                        DOC (CONT.)

            Have you ever heard of

            Kemper Halloway?

 

                        JUSTIN

            No.

 

                        DOC

            Kemper Halloway was a man

            with a very rare illness.

            It is sometimes referred

            to as Kemper Halloway’s

            disease. Kind of like the

            Lou Gehrig thing.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I have Lou Gehrig’s

            disease?

 

                        DOC  

            No, you have Kemper

            Halloway’s disease.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I’m afraid to ask.

 

                        DOC

            It’s not good. I can

            explain what you should

            expect or I can let you

            read some literature I

            have on it. I’ll answer

            your questions when

            you’re ready.

    

                        JUSTIN

            I’m not a reader.

 

                        DOC

            It is an extremely rare

            form of cancer.

 

     Justin, visibly crushed.

 

                        DOC (CONT.)

            You are a year into it.

            That is where these

            severe pains are coming

            from.

 

     Justin takes a deep breath.

 

                        DOC (CONT.)

            I can stop if you’d like.

 

     Justin shakes his head.

 

                        DOC (CONT)

            It is not going to be

            tolerable pain. I can

            provide pain killers that

            will only supply moderate

            assistance. You will of

            course have to leave the

            job.

 

     Justin stares aimlessly, grips the wax paper, forces    himself to his feet.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I’ll take the paper work.

 

                        DOC

            I’m sorry Justin.

 

                        JUSTIN

            It’s my own fault. I

            waited eight years. Can I

            get those pain killers?

    

                        DOC

            I have several

            prescriptions for you.

            One will give you a

            little more time but with

            the increase of pain, you

            may want less time.

 

                        JUSTIN

            How much time we talking

            about anyway?

 

                        DOC

            Without the medicine,

            that gives you what I

            calculated to seventy-one

            days. About twenty,

            twenty one till the real

            pain takes over.

 

     Justin grips the slip of paper bending the edges.

 

INT. LOCKER ROOM

 

     A dim, dreary room, grey walls, blue lockers, three     police officers finish putting on uniforms. KIP, BERG, CHARLIE.

    

     Charlie, less manly, frail, ties his shoe on the bench.

 

     Kip, burley prankster uses a high voice.

 

                        KIP

                   Charlie stop leaning over

            like that, you’re driving

            me wild.

 

                        CHARLIE

            Screw off.

 

     Berg, serious faced, thinner young man laughs.

 

                        BERG

            Yea you couldn’t handle

            all of that man. The more

            serious you take Kip’s

            insults, the more he’s

            gonna do it.

 

                        CHARLIE

            Yea yea.

 

     CAP, forties, stern, stops, notices the men.

 

                        CAP

            You clowns watch each

            others backs out there

            today.

 

                        BERG

            Yes Cap.

 

     Cap starts, takes a second glance.

 

                        CAP

            Where’s Haygen? Late

            again?

 

                        CHARLIE

            No Cap, I think he’s in

            the can.

 

     Cap continues to his office.

 

                        BERG

            Good cover Charlie.

 

                        CHARLIE

            I’ll always have Justin’s

            back.

 

                        KIP

            How many times have you

            had it already?

 

                        CHARLIE

            Take a walk Kip.

 

     Justin sneaks in.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Hey! You guys take it

            easy out there today.

 

                        BERG

            Speak of the devil.

            What’s up Haygen?

 

                        JUSTIN

            How is babysitting that

            piece of garbage kid

            toucher going?

 

                        KIP

            The crowd was so irate he

            had to spend another

            night. We’re going to try

            again tonight.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Really?

 

                        BERG

            Where’s the uniform?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Sorry fellas. I just

            stopped by to give you

            the news.

 

                        CHARLIE

            What news?

           

                        JUSTIN

            Mandatory vacation from

            the Doc.

 

                        BERG

            You okay?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Yea fine.

 

                        CHARLIE

            Why the vacation?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Just coming down with

            something and the stress

            of carrying a gun ain’t

            helping it.

 

                        KIP

            You’re kidding.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Wish I was.

 

                        BERG

            Who am I gonna partner

            with?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Get Gina off of desk.

 

                        BERG

            C’mon, Gina’s a girl.

 

                        JUSTIN

            You afraid of girls?

 

                        BERG

            Just the ones I want to

            sleep with.

 

                        JUSTIN

            You’re not supposed to

            sleep with your partner

            Berg.

 

                        BERG

            That’s only because I’ve

            had such an ugly one for

                               the last nine years.

 

     Kip motions toward Charlie.

 

                        KIP

            Make sure he knows that.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Enjoy your tour guys. I’ll

            be in with Cap.

 

                        BERG

            Take care of yourself

            Haygen.

 

                        KIP

            Yea.

 

                        CHARLIE

            We will always have your

            back.

 

                        BERG

            Look no further for a

            true brother.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Thanks.

 

     Justin cringes, squeezes his eyes, walks away.

 

     He stands hesitant before Cap’s door, knocks.

 

INT. OFFICE

                 

                        CAP  

            How was the can Haygen?

 

     Justin has no clue.

 

                        CAP (CONT.)

            What’s wrong? You look

            like crap.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Hit a man when he’s down.

 

                        CAP

            Down from what?

 

                        JUSTIN

            You have to call the Doc.

            I gave him permission to

            fill you in. Please keep

            it confidential. The guys

            know I’m on a mandatory

            vacation and for Berg’s

            sake put Gina in my place.

 

     Cap confused.

 

                        CAP

            I was going to have you

            and Berg look into the

            rapes in the park.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Rapes?

 

                        CAP

            Some maniac out there has

            been raping women and

            leaving them unconscious

            on the park swings.

 

                        JUSTIN

            That’s sick.

 

                        CAP

            Tell me about it.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Gina will enjoy that.

 

                        CAP

            She’s berserk over it

            already. So what’s with

            you?

 

                        JUSTIN

            I can’t talk about it

            with you Cap. It’s bad

            news. Do me a favor and

            see that Berg gets this

            when the time is right.

 

     Justin drops his badge on Cap’s desk.

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            He always joked that he

            should carry both of our

            badges.

      

     Justin exits Cap’s office.

 

INT. PRECINCT

 

     He passes a pretty young GINA at her desk. Dark hair,   hour glass figure lights up dull office.

 

                        GINA 

            Morning Haygen.

 

                        JUSTIN     

            Hey Gina. Get prepared

            for the street sweetheart.

 

     He pulls out his cell phone, dials.

 

EXT. SIDEWALK

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            At least this will give

            mom a happy day. Hey mom!

            How are things out there

            in Jersey?

 

INT. KITCHEN

 

INTERCUT

 

     His mom, ROSE, outgoing, soft older woman sits at a     table with a coffee cup.

 

                        ROSE

            Justin? Shouldn’t you be

            at work? What’s going on?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Did you forget ma? Didn’t

            I tell you I was taking a

            vacation?

 

                        ROSE

            Maybe you did. I can’t

            remember anything anymore.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I just wanted to see if

            someone was interested in

            Chinese for lunch.

 

                        ROSE

            Really? It’s not even

            Thursday. Or is it?

 

                        JUSTIN

            No, you’re right. It’s

            Monday. I’m gonna try to

            make it more than once a

            week from now on ma.

 

                        ROSE

            That is great. I have to

            tell your father.

 

     Justin’s dad, MATT, solemn, older man sits across reading newspaper.

 

                        ROSE (CONT.)

            Justin is going to have

            Chinese with me on a

            Monday honey. Isn’t that

            nice?

 

                        MATT

            Okay.

           

                        ROSE 

            You’re father is thrilled.

 

     Matt licks his finger, turns a page.

 

                        MATT

            Tell him to take the

            trash out before he

            leaves.

 

     The room is cozy, quiet. A shelf in front of a frosted window neatly decorated with flowers, ornaments, a       photo of Justin in uniform.

 

INT. RESTAURANT

 

     Justin walks into the small, quaint, Chinese      restaurant. A few tables along the side. He rubs his   shoulder then his temples, pops a pill. The man behind    the counter, CHIN, short, older Asian man with a      friendly smile, surprised.

           

                        CHIN

            Jus-in on Mon-ay?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Surprise Chin. Mom and me

            are gonna spend more time

            with you now. Let me have

            the Singapore Mei Fun,

            white meat chicken only,

            no pork, no shrimp, no

            mushrooms please.

 

     He pulls out his cell phone.

 

                        CHIN

            Singapore Mei Fun? The

            curry. You break out.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I don’t care if I break

            out anymore Chin.

 

     Justin dials.

 

                        CHIN

            Say herro to mother.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I will.

 

     He takes a seat behind a paper wall.

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            Hey ma. You there?

 

INT. NJ RESTAURANT

 

INTERCUT

 

     Rose sits in a similar setting. She smiles.

 

                        ROSE

            Hi baby boy. I am waiting

            for my Chow Mein.

 

     She places her purse beside her.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Guess what I ordered.

 

                        ROSE

            Garlic noodles?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Singapore Mei Fun.

 

                        ROSE

            Singapore Mei Fun? The

            curry. You’ll break out.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I don’t care if I break

            out anymore ma. By the

            way, Chin says herro.

 

                        ROSE

            That’s sweet. Tell him

            herro for me.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Tell him yourself. My

            food is here.

 

     He puts her on speaker, rubs his neck.

 

                        ROSE’S VOICE 

            Herro Chin.

 

                        CHIN 

            Oh herro Miss Hey-gon.

 

     He places a tray on the table.

 

                        ROSE’S VOICE

            Make sure my baby boy

            eats all of his

            vegetables.

 

     Chin laughs repeating Rose on his way into the    kitchen.

 

                        CHIN

            Baby boy eat all his

            vegetables.

 

     Justin smiles while shaking his head.

 

INT. OFFICE

 

     Cap holds the phone, his mouth open.

 

                        DOC’S VOICE

            Cap? Cap are you there? I

            know it is shocking news

            but.

 

     Cap shakes his head, contains himself.

 

                        CAP

            Sorry Doc. Just too much

            to take all at once. The

            poor guy didn’t even live

            the full life he should

            have.

 

     Cap holds the window shade open, a beautiful blue sky.

 

                        CAP (CONT.)

            And imagine his main

            concern is getting the

            right person to take his

            place as Berg’s partner.

 

     He glances out into the distance.

 

EXT. PARK

 

     The sun shines through trees above Berg who eats a hot dog walking with Gina. They pass a wall with graffiti on it. Gina holds her head.

    

                        GINA

            I don’t know if I can

            handle this. Rape has got

            to be the worst crime of

            them all.

 

                        BERG

            Personally I hate

            graffiti.

 

                        GINA

            How could you compare the

            two?

 

                        BERG

            I’m not comparing. I just

            think destroying the area

            you live in is the most

            mindless thing that

            someone can do.

 

                        GINA

            Rape is disgusting. They

            should cut it off after

            we catch him.

 

                        BERG

            They should cut off the

            whole hand for graffiti

            pollutionists.

 

                        GINA 

            You’re a lunatic.

 

                        BERG

            But my town is clean.

 

     They approach the swings, the playground area taped     off. A DETECTIVE shows them pictures of the victim      bruised and asleep on a swing. Gina covers her mouth, turns around.

 

                        BERG

            She’s a desk cop.

 

                        DETECTIVE

            I see.

 

                        BERG

            So what time did you get

            the call on this?

 

                        DETECTIVE

            About eleven AM. A mother

            and son were about to

            swing when the kid asked

            if God made homeless

            women.

 

                        BERG

            Touching.

 

     They continue to talk from the view of the RAPIST.

 

EXT. ROOFTOP

 

     The rapist dressed in black watches through binoculars laughing.

 

                        RAPIST

            Look at these bright cops.

            I should get her next.

 

     He lowers the binoculars, letting out a chuckle.

 

INT RESTARAUNT

 

     Justin pushes his tray aside, opens a fortune cookie.   He rubs his head and squints. A tear rolls down his    cheek.

 

                        JUSTIN

            You know I’ve questioned

            Charlie’s sexuality for

            year’s ma. I know the

            other guys have for a

            while. Especially Kip.

            He’s his partner for

            God’s sake.

 

INT. NJ RESTAURANT

 

INTERCUT

 

                        ROSE

            Isn’t there something you

            can do honey? Maybe the

            truth will set him free.

 

                        JUSTIN

            The truth will set him up

            for torture ma. These

            guys aren’t your

            politically correct unit

            from perfectville.

 

     He squeezes his elbow, makes a face.

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            What does yours say?

 

     Rose reads her fortune.

    

                        ROSE

            My dreams are golden,

            they will be made real.

            You?

 

                        JUSTIN     

            Keep the ones around you

            extra close and smile.

 

                        ROSE

            They’re always sweet and

            happy.

 

                        JUSTIN

            You’ll never get bad news

            in a fortune cookie.

 

                        ROSE

            Ain’t that the truth.

 

                        JUSTIN

            We’ll do it again

            Thursday ma?

 

                        ROSE

            Okay baby boy. Take care

            of yourself.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I will.

 

     He disconnects, rubs his lower back.

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            I should have taken care

            of myself eight years ago.

 

     He drops money on the table, exits waving goodbye to    Chin and the cooks.

 

EXT. RECORD STORE

 

     Justin stands under a sign. JARWAY’S RECORDS. He opens the door.

 

INT. RECORD STORE

 

     A small, clean shop with wall to wall rows of records. Justin, a look of comfort.

 

     A young, clean cut teenager approaches, NICK.

 

                        NICK

            Hey Mr. Haygen. Got that

            Jim Croce album you were

            asking about.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Hello Nick. Nice to see

            you. Where’s old Jarway?

 

                        NICK

            He went out on a run. I’m

            in charge.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Where’s the Croce?

 

                        NICK

            Can you tell me when he

            left us?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Jim Croce, 1973. Another

            hero of mine.

 

                        NICK

            Are there any you don’t

            know?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Test me.

 

                        NICK

            Ozzy Osbourne’s guitarist,

            after Sabbath.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Randy Rhoads, 1982. Can I

            use Felix’ computer?

 

                        NICK

            Sure thing. One day that

            will be my computer.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Thanks kid.

 

     Justin messes Nick’s hair, gets comfortable behind the counter.

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            You still have your heart

            set on running this place?

 

                        NICK

            You bet. Once Mr. Jarway

            has enough to retire and

            makes it to that beach

            house, I’ll be walking

            these aisles teaching

            kids about the old rock

            and roll. The good music.

 

                        JUSTIN

            That would be something.

 

     Justin brings up a blank screen on the computer. He     grins.

 

EXT. COURTHOUSE - NIGHT

 

     Scattered protesters. Mrs. De’meal cries in the arms    Mr. De’meal.

 

                        MRS. DE’MEAL

            Two years? This son of a

            bitch gets two years and

            they’re letting him out?

 

                        MR. DE’MEAL

            What comes around goes

            around honey. He’ll get

            his. I will make sure he

            burns in some kind of

            hell.

 

     Mr. De’meal holds her tight and releases.

 

                        MRS. DE’MEAL

            I can’t stay around here

            anymore. Let’s go home.

 

     Mr. De’meal helps her into the car.

 

                        MR. DE’MEAL

            You’re right honey. If I

            see this animal come out

            of those doors, I’ll end

            up doing more time than

            he did. He’ll get his.

 

     They pull away. Only a few remain.

 

     Darkness falls.

 

INT. COURTHOUSE

 

     Kip and Charlie on either side of the criminal. They    walk him out with his lawyer. Both faces are sickened.

    

EXT. COURTHOUSE

 

     The remaining protesters curse and threaten as the      four  walk down the steps toward a car.

 

     A shot is fired.

 

     Confusion.

 

     The criminal between Kip and Charlie has a large gaping hole in the middle of his forehead oozing blood.

 

     Kip shaken, smiles.

 

     Charlie turns away, vomits.

 

     Protesters cheer.

 

     The criminal lies lifeless on the steps after     convulsions.

 

     After brief silence, he is pelted with rocks and sticks.

 

     The lawyer drops taking a seat on the bloodied steps.

 

     Strobe lights flash off of the courthouse as the crowd grows, additional officers on the scene.

    

INT. LIVING ROOM

 

     Justin enters the front door, small, dark, unkempt      house. He holds his ear, looks at his fourteen year old daughter ALISSA sleeping on the couch. He     whispers.

 

                        JUSTIN

            At least you’ll be happy.

            You and that so called

            mother of yours.

 

INT. KITCHEN

 

     He grabs a beer from the refrigerator.

 

INT. HALLWAY

 

     He continues. Slows to look in at his wife RENEE sleeping in a bedroom.

 

INT. BASEMENT

 

     He turns the TV on, sits crying for a moment. Renee     barges in. Short woman, sleazy nightgown, curly,      mussed, brown hair.

 

                        RENEE

            Have a good time out?

            Why’d you bother coming

            home? Go ahead, drink

            your beer. You waste of

            life.

 

     Door slams.

 

INT. LIVING ROOM

 

     Alissa wakes.

 

                        ALISSA                  

            What’s going on ma?

 

                        RENNEE

            That useless bum decided

            to come home.

 

                        ALISSA

            Why don’t you just get

            someone to get rid of him?

 

                        RENEE

            We need his money. Go to

            your room.

 

INT. BASEMENT    

 

     Justin shakes his head.

 

                        JUSTIN

            All I did for her growing

            up. All I did for both of

            them. This is how you

            treat me?

 

     He looks up. Renee and Alissa’s muffled voices curse    his name.

    

     He reads the medicine bottle, chugs some pills with     beer.

 

                        JUSTIN

            She was my little sweet

            heart.

 

     He pulls a picture from the wall unit. Justin and a     four year old Alissa.

 

FLASHBACK

 

EXT. BEACH

 

     Four year old Alissa runs along the sand with shovel    and pail.

 

     Justin stands with his arms open. Alissa, big smile.

 

                        ALISSA

            Daddy!

    

     Just before a hug.

 

BACK TO SCENE

 

                        JUSTIN

            What happened to you?

 

     Rubs his temples.

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            You became the bitch

            known as your mother.

 

            Takes a sheet of paper and a pen from under the   couch. He writes for a moment.

 

     Drops the pen and picture, rests his head, closes eyes.

 

EXT. CLOUDS – DAY

 

DREAM SEQUENCE

 

     Justin is startled yet comfortable. He approaches large, golden gates standing firmly in the clouds. A     man, OZASIN, resembling Chin stands guarding the      gates.

 

                        OZASIN

            Good evening sir. Do you

            have your invitation?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Invitation? For what?

 

                        OZASIN

            Not just anyone can enter

            here.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Wait a second.

 

                        OZASIN

            Yes it is.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Then you’re St. Peter?

 

                        OZASIN

            Pete? Huh. That’s rich.

            I’m Ozasin, Pete hasn’t

            worked the gate in

            centuries. C’mon kid,

            things change over long

            periods of time.

 

                        JUSTIN

            You look like a friend of

            mine.

 

                        OZASIN

            Who? Chin?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Yes.

 

                        OZASIN

            Chin’s a good man. He has

            an invitation.

 

                        JUSTIN

            How do I get one?

 

                        OZASIN

            You’re doing well. But

            there are things we must

            discuss like your wife

            and daughter.

 

                        JUSTIN

            That wife is not the girl

            I married.

 

     An outline of two figures in the distance.

 

                        JUSTIN (CONT.)

            Who are they?

 

                        OZASIN

            Not now! We will re-write

            the Bible another time.

    

     A flash of light.

 

BACK TO SCENE

    

     Justin rolls off the couch.

 

INT. BATHROOM

 

     He showers.

 

EXT. STREET

 

     He throws a gym bag in the back of the pick up truck.

 

     Gets in and starts it up. Rock and roll on the    radio.

 

     Pulls away.

 

EXT. TOPS EHT

 

     He pulls off the main road onto a dirt road passing a   blue lake, a quiet getaway spot. The weeds as high as   the truck.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Tops eht. This tops it

            all. What to do with the

            few steps remaining in my

            life?

 

INT. CONFERENCE ROOM

 

     A group of law enforcement officials sit around a table, CARTER STRIE, DREA CORMEL, SHORT HENRY, GEORGE    NAYAL. After a moment of silence, Carter, a tall,       muscular, serious, African American man looks to    either side, a somber frown.

 

                        CARTER

            Even if we aren’t the

            Department of Homeland

            Security, the threat of a

            sleeper cell amidst our

            jurisdiction is our

            business.

 

     A woman in a business suit, Drea, disappointed.

 

                        DREA

            Sir, you heard what our

            people said.

 

                        CARTER

            That story is getting old.

            We must take these

            bastards out with or

            without flawless evidence.

 

     Short Henry, a little man.

 

                        HENRY

            I agree but they will

            come down on us hard if

            they find out we took

            matters into our own

            hands.

 

                        CARTER

            Yea, yea, yea. They don’t

            want blood unless it’s

            our own.

 

     Short Henry chuckles.

 

                        HENRY

            We should call in the one

            shot vigilante.

 

                        CARTER

            That leads us to our other

            order of business.

            Although I have no qualms

            about what happened to

            that sick child molester,

            I am already catching heat

            to find this guy. Again he

            is a murderer and the pig

            he killed was a human

            being.

 

                        HENRY

            Human being my ass.

 

                        CARTER

            You’re all aware of the

            clue he left behind.

 

     He holds up a rectangular sheet of paper.   KACBROUYEAVHSAWYLALILWEW.

 

                        HENRY

            Yep, and we’re all glad

            it makes so much sense.

 

                        DREA

            It’s every third letter.

 

                        CARTER

            We’ve been through that.

           

                        GEORGE

            No every third letter is

            a vowel.

 

                        HENRY

            It’s some sort of a

            jumble.

 

                        DREA

            Obviously it is an

            acronym of some sort.

 

                        HENRY

            Or a jumbled acronym.

 

                        CARTER

            Well one of you guy’s

            figure out what he’s

            saying in the jumbled

            acronym so we can get the

            investigation over with.

 

     Drea smirks.

 

                        DREA

            What makes you

            automatically think that

            it was a he that took him

            out?

 

     Short Henry giggles.

 

                        HENRY

            Because it only took one

            shot.

 

                        DREA

            Funny shortie.

 

                        CARTER

            As much as I hate to say

            it, we have to put a

            collar on this guy. Excuse

            me, guy or gal.

 

                        DREA

            Thanks sir.

 

                        CARTER

            As for this sleeper cell,

            I want someone close.

 

     He slowly puts his hands together.

 

INT. SLEEPER CELL

 

     Three young Arab men in American clothing, REZMAR,      BEILGAN, SHATZA, a dingy, small, dark basement room.      Laptop computer on a desk, Rezmar sits behind it. He      speaks with an accent.

 

                        REZMAR

            The SST. Imagine the

            Concord into building.

            The jets we used were

            enough but imagine for

            moment the Concord.

 

                                                    BEILGAN

            They are not made anymore.

 

                         REZMAR

            That’s why I say imagine.

 

     Beilgan smokes a cigarette while laughing.

 

                        BEILGAN

            You have big ideas.

            Concord would have been

            bigger success.

 

     Shatza spreads a map out on the desk.

 

                        SHATZA

            Wild fires here, here and

            here. That beginning. By

            the time we get here, here

            and here, the first ones

            are beyond control. With

            summer heat approaching

            in a few months and lack

            of water in these parts

            we will have half the

            nation burning in two

            week time. Then we begin

            next country.

 

                        REZMAR

            I like Shatza. I like

            very much. How many we

            have?

 

                        SHATZA

            We have twenty two cells,

            hundred and eighteen

            soldiers ready to kill in

            America.

 

                        REZMAR

            You can get them on this?

 

                        SHATZA

            Once you give me final

            word.

 

                        REZMAR

            I like but we have to

            make the plan to get

            soldiers in place and all

            begin at same time. This

            must be as perfect as our

            first masterpiece.

 

                        SHATZA

            I can have perfect map

            and plans on your lap top

            in five weeks the most.

 

                        REZMAR

            Terror-iffic!

 

     They all laugh.

 

                        REZMAR

            Now we can do plan for

            today.

 

                        SHATZA

            Rezmar?

 

                        REZMAR

            American hookers.

 

     They nod, a continuous laugh.

 

EXT. RECORD STORE

 

            Justin’s face broken out like Chicken Pox. He stands    in front of Jarway’s.

 

     A very sexy, aggressive brunette, URSULA, stops.

 

                        URSULA

            Where’ve you been Justin?

            I’ve missed you.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Hi Ursula. I’ve been here

            and there.

 

                        URSULA

            Whatta ya got the hives?

 

                        JUSTIN

            Nah, that’s from Chinese

            food.

 

     She places her hand on his chest. Long red finger nails fiddle with his collar.

 

                        URSULA

            It’s still not too late

            to get things going. That

            is if you and your wife

            are still on the outs.

 

     He holds her hand before it reaches his neck.

 

                        JUSTIN

            We’ll always be on the

            outs but it’s just not in

            me to cheat.

 

     Her hand slides to her side.

 

                        URSULA

            You’re too good for any

            one woman. The offer

            always stands. A free one

            whenever you need it.

 

     She struts down the sidewalk, Justin admires the view, enters Jarway’s.

 

INT. RECORD STORE

 

     An older African American man, JARWAY, smiles from      behind the counter. The bells ring.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Jarway.

 

                        JARWAY

            Son of a bitch! Nick told

            me you was by yesterday

            and now what you doin

            here on a Tuesday Haygen?

 

                        JUSTIN     

            I missed you.

 

                        JARWAY

            That’s bull.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Just makin sure things

            are okay.

 

                        JARWAY

            Where’s your uniform

            knuckle head?

 

                        JUSTIN

            At the cleaners.

 

                        JARWAY

            What’s wrong? You look

            like shit.

 

                        JUSTIN

            I feel worse.

 

     Jarway walks around the counter concerned.

 

                        JARWAY

            What’s up boy?

 

                        JUSTIN

            It’s nothing. Just under

            the weather.

 

                        JARWAY

            It’s not time for me to

            repay you is it?

 

                        JUSTIN

            No. I ain’t gonna die.

 

                        JARWAY

            Good thing. I’m too tired

            to go saving your life.

 

INT. RECORD STORE

 

FLASHBACK

 

      Jarway held at knifepoint at the register. The cash is       emptied into the masked CROOK’S pouch.
 
      Justin sneaks in from the back door, gun drawn.
 
      The crook stands in front of the counter. 
 
                  CROOK 
            Not a word to anyone 
            spook.
 
      Justin takes aim, one bullet behind each knee. The     crook falls to the ground screeching in pain.
 
      Berg enters through the front door, grabs the knife    from the ground.
 
      Justin looks at Jarway. 
 
                  JUSTIN
            You okay?
 
      Jarway nods, shaken.
 
      The crook moans.
 
      Justin smirks. 
 
                  JUSTIN
            Let’s go Berg.
 
                  BERG
            Aren’t you gonna call 
            an ambulance?
 
                  JUSTIN
            Ambulance’s are for 
            decent citizens. Let 
            this piece of shit 
            walk to the hospital.
 
BACK TO SCENE
 

                                                             JARWAY

                               What brings you around

            anyhow?

 

                        JUSTIN

            I just wanted to catch up

            where I left off last

            time I was here. Where

            were we?

 

                        JARWAY

            You left off at Keith

            Moon.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Right, that is an easy

            one, The Who. Moon left

            us in 1978.

 

                        JARWAY

            You’re sure good with the

            deaths. Why not focus on

            the lives?

 

     Justin thumbs through some records, pulls one out.

 

                        JUSTIN

            Here we go. A hero of

            mine that left us one

            year before Moon. When I

            go, make sure Simple man

            is blaring at my funeral.

            Ronnie Van Zandt, Skynard

            1977.

 

                        JARWAY

            It’s your wife’s job to

            make those arrangements.

 

                        JUSTIN

            You know damn well how I

            feel about her and she

            about me. I don’t even

            want her at my funeral.

 

                        JARWAY

            Okay, Simple man, Skynard.

            Consider it done.

 

     Justin stares at the album, Jarway approaches with      concern.

 

                        JARWAY (CONT.)

            You sure you okay?

 

     His hand rests on Justin’s shoulder.

 

INT. PRECINCT

 

     Gina tries on seductive strands of clothing from the    precinct undercover collection. Kip swings a pointed           cup bra around his finger while glancing in the box.

 

                        KIP

            Try this on.

 

     She gives him a push, laughs. Her 9 millimeter visible under her thigh strap.

 

                        GINA

            I’m nervous enough about

            this job, stop making it

            worse.

 

     Berg pushes Kip to the side.

 

                        BERG

            You’ll be fine. I’ll have

            your back the whole time.

 

                        GINA

            I bet you will.

 

     Kip walks off, looks from both of them.

 

                        GINA (CONT.)

            Are you sure? Not only am

            I a stranger to being

            away from my desk, but

            now undercover trying to

            seduce a rapist?

 

                        BERG

            He’ll melt in your hands.

 

                        GINA

            Berg.

 

                        BERG

            What? I’m serious. You’re

            a knock out in this get

            up.

 

     Their eyes meet, a significant moment.

 

                        GINA

            You better be there for

            me.

 

                         BERG

            Always.

           

     Gina walks toward the door. Berg stares.

 

                        BERG (CONT.)

            I hope I can concentrate

            on my job.

 

EXT. ROOF TOP

 

     Above the park a block away, the rapist watches   through binoculars. The park is calm. He breathes deep. He spits peanut shells on the roofs surface.

    

     From his position, Gina is seen strutting along toward a bench. The rapist perks up.

 

                        RAPIST

            Well well, a show.

 

     Gina stretches nervously and peers in each direction    sitting on the wooden bench.

 

     The rapist gets a better view with his binoculars. He   chews noisily, chuckles.

 

                        RAPIST (CONT.)

            Legs. Nice.

 

     Gina crosses her legs, looks over her shoulder,   places her purse on the bench.

 

                        RAPIST (CONT.)

            Rack. Nice.

 

     He continues chewing noisily, breathing, becomes concerned.

 

                        RAPIST (CONT.)

            What do we have here?

 

     Scans the area. A reflection off a car bumper. In the   driver seat, Berg crouched down, with binoculars.

    

EXT. PARK

 

     Gina stands. Berg lifts himself up watching her, whispers.

 

                        BERG

            No Gina. Stay. We can’t

            give up yet.

 

     She walks toward the swings.

 

                        GINA

            This is crazy. I can’t sit

            still. It’s getting cold.

 

     She looks to trees. Behind the trees, lightless house. The wind howls by the windows.

 

     Berg opens car door slowly. The dashboard rings, keys   in ignition. Quickly pulls them out, rests them on the seat. Crouches down, loses sight of Gina, crawls        around a tree.

 

     Gina’s legs are visible moving quickly back to the      bench. She stands.

 

     Berg cocks his gun.

 

EXT. ROOF TOP

 

     The rapist takes it all in, laughs, places binoculars   down.

 

                        RAPIST

            Nice try dopes. You think

            I’m that stupid?

 

     Slowly turns from his spot, a bullet is put in his      forehead. Blood oozes, he drops. A shadow moves across     the wall on top of the building.

 

     The lifeless body lies surrounded by puddles and peanut shells.

 

EXT. PARK

 

     Gina continues to Berg. He is confused.

 

                        GINA 

            I had a weird feeling.

            Can we try again later or

            better yet, tomorrow?

    

     She enters the car’s passenger side.

    

     Berg turns the key, disappointment.

    

EXT. PARK - MORNING

 

     Kip and Charlie walk.

 

                        KIP

            Dude, you have to stop

            acting like such a lady.

 

                        CHARLIE

            Lay off.

 

                        KIP

            I’m serious. People are

            talking.

 

                        CHARLIE

            You think I care?

 

                        KIP

            Yea, I do.

 

                        CHARLIE

            Well I don’t.

 

                        KIP

            You can’t be ser-

 

     Charlie interrupts nervously.

 

                        CHARLIE

            What the hell is that?

 

                        KIP

            What is what?

 

     Charlie points to the swing, a large figure sways slowly.

 

                        CHARLIE